Please help me on these sites

[justice4all]

The web sites are:

[eCommando]

Nice sites.
You have a good PR. What do you need help with?

[justice4all]

I need to know what i should do to increase my placement in search engines. I do ppc adds thru goggle and overture which get me good results. I would like to know what steps i should take to improve search results.

[Dreamshop]

Justice....what are your main keywords? have you optimized the site at all? what have you tried in the past?

[justice4all]

main keyword are sunglasses,underwear,fcuk,belts,watches,men's apparel.
I have done the optimizing myself. I have made sure to include good content.

[leeds1]

None of your search terms are in your title - pretty key I think

[leeds1]

Bl**dy hell - I've just had a look at your meta tags

They're too long to post here - just put in 5/6 words not 50000

[Dreamshop]

He does have his keywords on secondary pages, and actually some decent pagerank...but NO metatags on these pages at all.

I would focus the home page on the main theme [men's clothing, mens apparel, mens fashion]. Then drill down on your other keywords [designer sunglasses, wrist watches, etc].

Justice...How long ago did you optimize your secondary pages? Have you seen any changes in your serps?

These are all REALLY competitive keywords.

[Dreamshop]

You ARE number 1 on Google for "Steve Madden Wallet". Just keep drilling down like this.

Do you have a backlink strategy?

[leeds1]

That phrase had under 20k competing so you should be able to do well.

Trouble is Dreamshop this is in the page:

<meta NAME="Keywords" CONTENT="

460 words/ many duplicated

I know G does not take this into account for ranking, but would these be considered spam?