What Do you think of Papas Choppers

[wrockca]

Hello everyone, this is one of my current site I am working on.

Keywords focused for this site are:

orange county choppers,american chopper,orangecountychoppers.com,west coast choppers,custom choppers,westcoastchoppers.com, von dutch,von dutch original,vondutch.com, tattoo, occ, custom choppers

URL to Visit:

Click to view my site:Papas Choppers (http://www.papaschoppers.com)


I just recently posted the site I have built targeted links at the bottom using keywords that then go into content pages to build relevancy.


Thanks everyone

[dilligaf]

Rock, I had a quick look and a couple of questions. I'm assuming you have the appropriate permissions to use the images in the header and any related content. Is this their page (the guys on TV)?

You link back to home with index.asp, you may want to consider the domain.

A personal preference, the header works for me on the home page but the more you see it... maybe go static on supporting pages.

Maybe use alt attributes on the credit card images.

It looked like you were using an external css file but then looked as if you were defining the css at the bottom of the page. Lot's of paragraph breaks?

Some pages missing (ex: monkey but powder)

I don't think all the orange county links will hurt ya but that's alot of Orange County.

The links are the big thing:
21 allinanchor orange county choppers

[wrockca]

Thanks for the great Advise, I will work on that as for the header I am in the process of changing that, I had sent them an email asking if this was ok. I do have written permition from one of them so far. I will work on reducing the amount of times orange county choppers shows, that is one of the most competitive words in my industry its very hard to rank high on that term.

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