View Full Version : Please review - New alterations


Datagg
08-19-2004, 01:00 PM
Hello again. And thank you all who have given me suggestions in the past.

Lost of new products up etc, color changes, navigation changes, pretty much an entire revamp. Anyways im wondering how it looks to you all now.
Im showing inclines in the engines, yet im wondering if its going at a good pace for a little more than 2 months out of the gate, or I have lots more to do SEO wise. Another question that I wanted to ask is my adult section. The title of the site is Girlfriends lingerie, so I wanted to stay on that playing field, as being the most of what i sell. I just last week, began to add a adult section also. In keeping with a non-pornoish way of sorts, i added the section Adult novelties. Once thsi is clicked it goes to liek a warning page of upcoming pages and the content of them. Im wondering if this was a good way of doing it. By keeping the adult section 3 deep in links, im hoping that this will keep the site on the side of classy vs trashy. What do you think of it? Should I even bother with this warning page??

Again thank you for your time, and as always I look forwrod to any ideas site wide you may have..

Girlfriends Lingerie (**PM me for the URL since it's adult**)

Bless

Dan

Datagg
08-20-2004, 11:52 PM
Hmm sorry ....I didnt think bout that. Doesnt anyone have anything to add??? or is it just that bad....uggg

Datagg
08-21-2004, 10:35 AM
Im showing a total of 6,400 unique hits, according to yahoo, and with only 1 sale thus far, im seriously wondering what is wrong here. Does no one have any opinions on this, like why, i woudl liek to think that 1 more out of 6,000 woudl find something of value here. The lack of orders, propels me to think the site sucks, poorly laid out, etc.......or am I going overboard here...Anyone??????

jocelyn
08-21-2004, 10:50 AM
Not everyone like doing site reviews. If someone does them, he usually look at the threads that have 0 replies. You replied to my edit and are posting again... this makes your thread look like if it was answered to.

When I looked at your site before editing your post, it looked okay, not ugly like you say. Well it's true I was looking more at the products (cough!) but to say it looks bad... no. PM me the URL, I'll look at the site again (cough, cough !!) and try to find suff to say...

jocelyn
08-21-2004, 11:36 AM
Ok... overall it looks good, colors are not bad (colors are always hard). Maybe the white text on pink could be hard to read for some people.

Stuff is well arranged and easy to find. I skipped the men section if you don't mind, must be like the girls pages anyway... lol

I'm not too hot about the items for sale on the home page. You have just a few seconds to make a good impression or the dude will press the BACK button on his browser. I'd try to get them to read a bit and click a section instead of hitting them from the start. Your way might be better, I'd try both to see if one gets better results.

Models are nice, produts are nice, I'd wait a while to see what happens. 2 months is still young for a site.

You might consider making more links page out of the humongous one you have. I would not wan't a link on that page, there are too many of them on it.

Datagg
08-21-2004, 02:28 PM
Thank you so much for the review. I was contemplating on adding those pics to main page, its all about grabbing attention, thus the images, yet as you said it may not be the way to go. As far as the link page, yes you are right, ill begin to split them up across more pages. Colors, my gosh you are so right, tough call on those. Im also wondering, if that adult section, the warnign page is good, or just a wasted space. Again thanks you so much for your words, ill get busy on that link page soon.

PS.LOL, its ok to skip the mens section,hehe...
Bless ya

Dan