Any feedback would be appreciated

[jg123]

the url is http://www.iwantgame.com

My keywords are everquest, platinum and saryrn

I have manually changed the title section, description, key words and also made a link to the top which includes key words.

I did try and change the name of the picture that I use as a logo to include a keyword but it did not seem to work and had to change it back.

I would like to start working on external links but I know I have some work to do on my pages first.

A question, is there a way to use the links for my shopping cart items to help with my keywords too? off page I mean?

Any feedback, help would be awesome!

thanks
Jay

[smindsrt]

FYI

Your site is not loading! 8/26/04 8:34 PST :eek:

[melaniejk]

Hmm, sorry I didn't understand what you are selling. But, I'm not into computer games.
Maybe you can explain what platinum is. It might not be necessary with your audience, but it will provide an opportunity to put more keywords on your page.

[jg123]

platinum is the name of the ingame currency, not sure what luck I would have trying to get ranked with that keyword since I am sure it is very widely used.

Jay

[gthelp.com]

What is the site about? Even if you have people visiting the site it would be somewhat confusing ... even for your targeted audience.

I recommend starting with a short company intro--what is your/site about?
Add more pages; more links.

Are you with the BBB? There is nothing better than the seal of approval. :)