My site don't come up in google

[yanuart]

Hi, I've done some SEO myself that included :
1. Blatant title
2. meta keywords
I've also submit mysite at Open Directory Project, but it's been almost a month and I've never see my site shown correctly on google
what must I do ??

ps : this is my site www.iplayallday.com (http://www.iplayallday.com)

please review my site
thank you

[jocelyn]

You title is not good buddy. Fix this to aim at your best keywords. "and more!" does not help, remove that and put good keys instead. I'd put the IplayAllDay at the end instead or not at all. Title is the most important tag... don't waste it.

You can remove the robots tag, useless unless restrictive to robots actions.

I'd take it easy on the addsence there. The surface occupied by the adsence, compared to content just makes me think you want a click... I'm gone...

Site is cool, nice design. Fix these title and strip a bit of adsence to look like you have more content than adds and it should be cool, after you get lots of links to it.

[HumorBug]

Nice Site,

I think all you really have to work on is link bulding, and repositioning your keywords.

Also, be a bit patient. A lot of people having difficulty getting into google right now, hopefully it will be over soon.

Thanks
HB