2nd request for site review -pleeez

[Karl]

Hi, thanks for taking the time to read this...

I'd like your opinion on my site,

http://www.deciding-on-divorce.com

I am going for keys:
1. deciding on divorce
2. deciding about divorce
3. divorce reasons
4. should i get a divorce
5. extramarital affair
more keys later, but haven't started on them yet.

SEO that I have attempted:
1. I tried to write fairly naturally with regards to the articles, sort of force fed some keys a few times I believe...H tags and title tags seem to be ok although I would like a critique there too!

2. Didnt think the key tags or content tags were up to par or even necessary?

3.I wasn't sure if my code was se friendly...can GoogleBot find my pages quickly? There's jscript tracking code on lots of the pages, wasn't sure if that affects ranking or se visibility.

4. Partner links are few, need more here I believe or at least some higher pwered ones. My ? is, is my site map and all other links structure withing the site itself optimized?

I very much look forward to any response or help that you can give.

Looking forward to some SEO insight! :cool:

Thanks much

Karl Augustine
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[chili]

Well, you are number 1 and 2 for "deciding on divorce", so, good job! I personally stay away from sites that have extremely long pages filled with ad-copy. I would break that site up into more pages and optimize each page for specific phrases.

Many "ad copy" experts might disagree, but long winded sales pitches on long web pages lose credibilty in my mind. I've experimented with this and have shown astounding results. I increased sales on one of my sites by 300% in one month, just by shortening the copy and increasing the font size. Guess what? people actually read it now!

[irish_ladie]

Hi Karl

I agree with chili...........way too long.........I would feel like
divorcing the site.....I think it could be really good with smaller
pages and the chance to optimise it more. Have more anchor
text links as well for your keywords would be good. Also I see
the navigation at the end - could you not put some navigation
on the top as well? Or make the logo clickable with your homepage
- they say this is good to do..

Found no header tags on the following pages

http://www.deciding-on-divorce.com/divorce-articles.htm
http://www.deciding-on-divorce.com/divorce-articles.htm

Best of luck!

[chili]

Hey Irish-ladie,
You might be very interested in this:
http://search.yahoo.com/search/dir?p=www.wedding-bands.ws&ei=UTF-8&fr=fp-tab-web-t

Domain is available to register!

[Karl]

Thanks for the feedback. Yes, sales copy can be tightened up a bit :D

Any insights on my other questions?

2. Didnt think the key tags or content tags were up to par or even necessary?

3.I wasn't sure if my code was se friendly...can GoogleBot find my pages quickly? There's jscript tracking code on lots of the pages, wasn't sure if that affects ranking or se visibility.

4. Partner links are few, need more here I believe or at least some higher pwered ones. My ? is, is my site map and all other links structure withing the site itself optimized?

Thanks to any who give insight.

Karl