The Perfect Site - Please Review - Morgan you would be proud!

[ABS659]

Ok Here goes
The URL is = http://www.aboutsingles.net/
My Target keywords are
"Christian Single"

My keyword frequency is
christian 46 8.08%
singles 25 4.39%
dating 22 3.87%

My competitor for the #1 spot is
http://www.singlec.com
christian 16 8.94%
singles 11 6.15%
single 7 3.91%

I have H1 and H2 tags with my Keyword phrase
I have bold and italic keyword phrase though out my site and through out the normal body text.

I have a page rank of 6 on the home page.

I have totally redid this site.

My Keyword meta tag and description have my keywords
in the most prominent position.

I have link text from internal pages pointing to my main page.

I have started getting back links using my keyword in the anchor text.

i.e.

<a href="http://www.aboutsingles.net" title="Christian Single">Christian Single</a>


*********** Did I miss anything ************

Don't be shy. Come on...

Morgan Did I miss anything?

My only question would be how is my Page Rank linking?
Meaning did I link the site to receive the most amount of page rank though out the site?

[jlknauff]

From a useability standpoint your site leaves a lot to be desired. The design also didn't give me any reason to continue into the site but I did for the sake of a review. None of your asp generated links seemed to work either. It looked like the first half was chopped off.

[wlh]

ok this is a little off the topic but I wouldn't reccommend having nude pictures and links on your site if you are also targeting religious singles... this is not good at all.

[seo guy]

Seeing as I was called out on this one, I am not going to lie to you abs, I think you missed the point of a website altogether. I mean from a pure SEO perspective if you are going to try just to see if you can get a site ranked, then it should look something like wlh's http://www.seolife.com/olympia-coffee.html but your site actually seems to be attempting to target users. I'm sorry man, all I see is spam, I click on links and see stuff like

"Datingpearl :: Free Personals Singles Online Dating Services for ...
... finest free online dating and free personals services with the hottest matchmaking
photo personal ads internet dating site. Seek American singles love partner ...
http://

A Christian Singles Cafe - Site For Single Christians Looking for ...
... is a national and international Christian dating site. ... from the USA, Christian singles
from Canada ... Many African, American singles, Asian, Australian, Canadian ...
http://"

Makes no sense to me as a user, and if you arent building a website for visitors what is the point of trying to get them?

I think something has gone totally wrong if you think that this website is something I would teach someone to be the pinnacle of "Optimized duality" http://www.seo-guy.com/seo-tutorial/optimized-duality.html perhaps you might want to re-read the page I'm sorry to be so negetive about your effort, but it is certainly not something I would be "proud of"