Looks not bad, but a bit like a big block of text. Maybe put some pics of some kind, a few links in the content pointing to other internal pages... something to make the page more interesting.

When I went on the site, it jammed for a good 30 sec... a few pages went quick, then again, super slow... more than 30 sec... but this time, instead of waiting, I did what most people must be doing... I just left.